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| This is my first attempt at a first draft of a music magazine. After making this I noticed several mistakes that I needed to correct such as: The title needing to be more central , one of the sell lines needed to say 'from the IoW to V the top 10' , the information about the cover model needed to be moved further up as the first two letters of 'front' weren't very clear , further down in the 'plus' box there was a word missing and a spelling mistake - it needed to say 'Lana Del Rey: love or hate? and 'The black keys' should have been 'The Black Keys' and finally the barcode didn't look very realistic. |
I made these changes to the first draft as you can see in version 1. I then decided to have a go at creating some other variations as can be seen in versions 2 and 3.
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| Version 1 |
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| Version 2 |
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Version 3
Final first draft This is my final attempt at a first draft. There are still changes I would make to my final piece for example the competition circle is not very circular and I would like to swap the tagline and website around, but overall I am happy with the layout and will use it for my final one.
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